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| Author | Message | | | Posted on Fri Mar 13, 2009 22:30:24 | |
| | Carmen 43 wasn't translated by a native or fluent speaker, it doesn't make much sense and has an incorrect sintax as well as incorrect latin translations. My version:
Hola, chica sin pequeña nariz,
Ni pies bonitos, ni ojitos negros
Ni dedos largos, ni labios secos,
Ni ciertamente un habla elegante.
Amiga del quiebro de Formiae ,
La provincia cuenta que eres hermosa?
¡O, imprudente y insÃpido siglo!
Regards,
Laura Rammeloo | |
| | | Posted at Fri Mar 13, 2009 22:53:52 | Quote |
| | Correction:
¡O, imprudente e insÃpido siglo! | |
| | | Posted at Fri Mar 13, 2009 23:01:48 | Quote |
| | Another correction, my apologies:
Tecum Lesbia nostra comparatur?
¿Contigo es comparada nuestra Lesbia?
Regards,
Laura Rammeloo
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| | | Posted at Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:04:47 | Quote |
| | Thank you for your translation! I have added it to the collection.
Best,
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